Thealyn Rosewolf

AN: So, this is a first draft, I don't doubt that I accidentally left out a word, messed up on grammar or spelling, but that's why I'm posting it. ^_^ ...

AN: So, this is a first draft, I don't doubt that I accidentally left out a word, messed up on grammar or spelling, but that's why I'm posting it. ^_^ ...

The beginning was kind of a rush, you really didn't waste any time just jumping in with the character of Jeff. Will there be more of an explanation of what ...

The whole thing felt very rushed, which is an effect you can give in an effective way without being choppy. I would take a couple of minutes and tell us ...

1. Does this make you want to read more? It certainly was intriguing. The part that grabbed my attention was the very last sentence, I can say for sure, I ...

It's very vague. That's not a bad thing if you plan to start out using this scene as an introduction, but I definitely encourage you to add a little bit ...

What if everyone in the world had a twin?

I'm going to go see the film with some friends to see if it can get any better, or any worse then the book. I always prefer the books to ...

What if science was taking us backwards instead of forwards?

First of all sorry, it took so long. My computer broke! >.< Um, I play the cello-since the fourth grade so that's about...8ish years. I was in choir all throughout ...

I know exactly how you feel, I have the same problem. But actually what I've started doing is just writing down the image I have in my head. Like with ...

I haven't read Breaking Dawn yet, but isn't she a vampire by then? And even if she's not, it could just be that Edward's paternal instincts are in control rather ...

Thanks Angel and Merry_Haven, you both are very sweet. If you want to know my secret for my username, I took my nickname 'Thea' and part of my middle name ...

I would definitely try Phillipa Gregory. She is the author of The Other Bolyen Girl which was fabulous. The movie, not so much. But she is a fantastic writer, I ...

Personally, the whole, Bella getting pregnant is too far fetched. Because, very technically speaking, vampires are dead. This includes Edward, and to be able to have your reproductive organs functioni